2nd meeting with A.P. Dr. Baba
Saw PM Dr. Baba on Monday 2/10/2006 the first thing in the morning. His comments on the paper I sent to him a couple weeks back:
•Provide picture or diagram when discussing dimensions of driver’s anthrop
•Write short sentences
•Every mentioned quote must be in the reference including standards e.g. ISO or BS
•Must be specific e.g...in earlier/previous discussion…where??
•Improve the sentences, short, brief and easy to understand sentences
•Conclusion must be of your own based on the paper that you have written (no referencing).
a point that i missed from the book when i submitted the paper was do not send first draft to supervisor...make it a final draft.
•Provide picture or diagram when discussing dimensions of driver’s anthrop
•Write short sentences
•Every mentioned quote must be in the reference including standards e.g. ISO or BS
•Must be specific e.g...in earlier/previous discussion…where??
•Improve the sentences, short, brief and easy to understand sentences
•Conclusion must be of your own based on the paper that you have written (no referencing).
a point that i missed from the book when i submitted the paper was do not send first draft to supervisor...make it a final draft.
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